I wanted to point out how your poetry reveals a completely different side of you compared to your science-fiction novel Hearts of Arkenston. Reading your poem gave me a taste of a genre that’s unlike your usual work, and it was genuinely intriguing to see that range.
Wow… I don’t even know where to start 😳
Reading this felt like stepping into another world….. full of stars, music, and that kind of love that makes everything else fade.
The way you wrote their connection, the waltz, the universe…. it honestly gave me chills…..
loved it.
Thank you for letting me feel something so alive and beautiful
You are very welcome! Thank you for reading! It was a joy to envision and write it.
🙌🏻
Lovely rhythm and imagery in this one. I like these lines "Whirling wheels of fire bright,
The waltz burns sheer delight,"
I've never thought of describing a waltz as burning.
I’m so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for your kind words!
It’s so nice to see how your poems read compared to your novels.
Thank you!
Now I’m curious…. What comparisons are you seeing? ;-)
I wanted to point out how your poetry reveals a completely different side of you compared to your science-fiction novel Hearts of Arkenston. Reading your poem gave me a taste of a genre that’s unlike your usual work, and it was genuinely intriguing to see that range.
Ah! Yes, this makes sense. Thank you for answering!
Of course :)
The poem flows so well I loved this one!! Can’t wait to read more of your work!!
Thank you very much for your kind words!
This vaguely reminds me of Lord of the Rings and all the songs/poems in there lol
I'll take that as a compliment (since most people like Tolkien).... ;-)
So thank you!
Oh it is! I’m currently in the middle of reading it for the first time, so it’s fresh on the mind.
That's great! I personally love those books!
So a definite thank you for your kind words! ;-)
This was phenomenal. Full of rhythm and movement!! 💕
Thank you very much! The poem was a joy to write!
Lovely dance of words :)
Thank you very much! I enjoyed writing it.
Beautiful. The dance of death and life. This was a really beautiful read
Thank you very much!
This is absolutely beautiful. I wish I could write with such grace!
Thank you very much!