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RG's avatar

Wow… I don’t even know where to start 😳

Reading this felt like stepping into another world….. full of stars, music, and that kind of love that makes everything else fade.

The way you wrote their connection, the waltz, the universe…. it honestly gave me chills…..

loved it.

Thank you for letting me feel something so alive and beautiful

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Inga Jones's avatar

Lovely rhythm and imagery in this one. I like these lines "Whirling wheels of fire bright,

The waltz burns sheer delight,"

I've never thought of describing a waltz as burning.

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